Nora from Kevin Wegener on Vimeo.
Thursday, October 31, 2013
Thursday, October 24, 2013
Nora 2nd Edit
Nora from Kevin Wegener on Vimeo.
My first short film made at Syracuse University for TRM-153
Nora (cut version) from Kevin Wegener on Vimeo.
Here's my short film "Nora" with dining hall and coffee shop scenes cut as suggested by Jessica Posner. I figured I should at least try to the idea. I felt like the video lost a lot by cutting the scenes. It lacks character development between Nora and Aaron. At the end when he claims to have tried doesn't work because he really didn't do much at all. We miss the arc of him going from an awkward guy trying to ask a girl out to a romantic on a date until he finally breaks at the end and gives up. We also miss out on the awkward moments between the two created by Nora's cold attitude. In the end I'm glad to have at least tried this idea, but overall the result lacks.
Thursday, October 17, 2013
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